Persimmon
It tastes like a yummy mango
Crunchy, sweet round persimmons
Perfect Persimmons Taste Terrific
The seeds look disgusting!
Did you know that persimmons first grew in China
I excitedly crunched into the persimmon ready to taste a new fruit for me.
Mia, great use of alliteration.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Stunna
I like to play rugby and I my team is called y m p.
I go to Riverdale and I am a year 5.
I am 10 years old and my teacher name Koka Beccs.
i like how you tolled me about your writing about persimmon saying crunched on the persimmon and the seeds you tell me about the seeds you tolled me that the seeds are smooth on the seed an d you tolled me about how disgusting the persimmon taste like as well
ReplyDeletenext time can you put more full stops and captain letters in your writing.
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